This is definately not epic.
Sorry man but it's true. I like it as a beginning to a song but there's just not enough to it. Make the whole thing drop out and come back in huge with a sweet chorus and THEN it will truely be epic. I see this as a part where a main character is just getting up and preparing for battle, and that's not epic in my book. Make it explode with a huge bang and intense, fast-pased sound. Reupload afterward